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Doujinshi commentary: Itsuka kaeru tokoro e kaeru tame ni(?)

Circle:    Eggnut    Itsuka kaeru tokoro e kaeru tame ni: Front Cover
Type:   Normal, gags & serious story. 26 pages.
Date:   2002/03/17

First of all, I'm not sure I've got the title right. What I can make out of it is "The place to return to someday"... something something. I think I'm on the right track, as the recorder music you hear on the game's startup screen is titled "The Place I'll Return To Someday." If you can read this better than I can - it's on the front cover - please feel free to send me a correction.

It's not too easy to summarize the stories and gags in this one. They aren't as clean or visually-oriented as some of the others I've read. It's easier to talk about the cast involved. One involves Zidane, Ruby, and Garnet. Another involves most of the active cast checking Kuja out. Zidane snatches Vivi's hat, and his head turns out to be just the same shape as his hat. The serious story starts with Blank and a very upset Zidane, and ends with Zidane's return to Alexandria. Not quite sure what happens in between, unless the middle scenes include reminisces.

I'm not a fan of this art. I've seen worse, but I've also seen better. It has flaws that stand out, such as Garnet's overshot lower jaw on the cover, arms being wonkily connected to bodies, Kuja's misdrawn hand in the above page, heads being way too far forward on their necks. But I can be very picky.

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