Doujinshi commentary: an earthly paradise

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Circle:		Ayuya/Mutsuki Ohsumi
Type:		Normal, gags & serious stories. 42 pages.
Date:		2001/08/10

The first story in this doujinshi is a rather grim one featuring Kuja, Garland, and... some people who don't live very long. At the beginning of the story Kuja is very young, and it appears that he has accidentally killed some other people as his power came in. Kuja is guilt stricken; Garland seems much less upset, perhaps even proud of his creation. Later on an older Kuja kills a woman who asks him if he's a Genome, and Garland does take exception to this. It appears that Kuja has become accustomed to harming others without much thought.

The gags include Vivi going into trance and attacking a ladybug, Salamander's hair growing out of control, and the like. The doujinshi finishes with a second serious story, one which starts when Zidane sees Garnet in her royal robes and can't speak to her. He goes to the pub, where others talk to him, then finally goes back to Garnet and tells her "Ganbareyo" (do your best - "good luck").

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